Lochlan! thats amazing, you have really painted a picture in my head that I didnt need to look at the photo. Well done! I like how it landed in Christchurch and not hokitika!
Hi Lochlan I love your sentence "Frightened people are sending Snapchats to other people". It made my smile. You have done an awesome job! Well done Lochlan!
Thanks for sharing your writing with us Lachlan. I love the sentence that his eyes are glowing headlights I can really see this picture in my head. Keep up the great writing. Ann
Lochlan! thats amazing, you have really painted a picture in my head that I didnt need to look at the photo. Well done! I like how it landed in Christchurch and not hokitika!
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ReplyDeleteI love your sentence "Frightened people are sending Snapchats to other people". It made my smile. You have done an awesome job! Well done Lochlan!
I am glad I do not live in Christchurch Lachlan. There are some great sentences there. His eyes are glowing like headlights. Ka pai
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your writing with us Lachlan.
ReplyDeleteI love the sentence that his eyes are glowing headlights I can really see this picture in my head.
Keep up the great writing.
Ann